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Journal Entry 1: Noah and Abbey's dad sinks the Coral Queen and waits at the dock for the cops to arrest him.

I **cant** belive that my dad my very own dad sunk the Coral Queen! I wonder how he did it and why did he wait for the cops to get **there Im** freeking out, who in the right mind would sink a boat and wait there! Also, why does he want to stay in jail? **Im** worried about mom because she looks really mad he **wont** let **he** bail him out, because he wants to fight for his case. **And** dont get me wrong but I dont think he should have sunken the Coral Queen in the first place.- Abbey

Abbie, You did a great job responding to the first prompt. I used **bold lettering to** highlight some errors in grammar. Overall, excellent job on entry number 1.

Mr. M Journal Entry 2: Noah gets punched in the eye by Jasper Jr. and eventually sinks Jasper and Bull's boat.

I see why Noah sunk Jasper And Bull's boat but you should never get back at a person also they should have never hit Noah because he could have done something worse then what he di to them. So they could stop picking on him because he can fight back.-Abbey

Journal Entry 3: Noah has made a deal with Lice to give him his father's skiff (boat) in exchange for Lice's testimony against Dusty Muleman.

I cant belive that dad would just give away his skiff like that I liked that skiff! Also why would give it to that lazy person that does not know how to drive a boat that looks like he is drunk all the time and has lice. How did Lice ever get a job as lazy as he is, and i dont think he likes to do much work.

=__THE TAIL﻿ __= Omg! I thougt I was black! If my tail was black then why is it yellow with pink and blue polkadots? Wait a minute, why am I flying and where am I going? Wow, this is kind of fun, wait why am I going to the bank? I think I need to stop the crime that is happening right now. Do I have to fly all over the world to stop people who are doing the crime? Sorry I got to go. Bum bada bum bada. Its time to cheer because Super Storm is here! Im going to smak you with my tail. Thwak thwak thwak, that must hurt. Once again Super Storm has done it. Oooo...... Im in the mood for chicken. I know where Im going right now, fresh chicken nam nam nam nam nam, time to go, but where am I going, to the docks some guy is stealing a boat.